Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts
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Tuesday, February 25, 2020

Tautology – Wordplay Wednesday™ 02/26/2020


Seedless, Heedless, Needless … One of Them Applies 

One makes some foods easier to eat. Another makes us wonder whatever happened to society’s common sense. All great subjects ripe for review; however, this week, we’re talking about writers’ bad habits …

TAUTOLOGY (tô täʹɘ jē) n. – 1-a) needless repetition of an idea in different words, redundancy, pleonasm (Ex.: “necessary essentials,” b) an instance of such repetition; 2) Logic: a proposition that is analytic (sense 5). [WW #257] [Look for this accompanying word as next week’s Wordplay.]

Yep, I have found myself guilty of tautology at times. Most of us are … “free giveaway” … comes easily to mind. We are either in too much of a hurry to properly edit, or perhaps it’s done purposely to over-emphasize a point. Of course, that doesn’t make it right.

A few more fun examples: "I want to live while I am alive." Bon Jovi (“It’s My Life”; 2000) … “I made this for you with my own hands” … and my personal favorite, the ever popular … “It is what it is.” Of course, that last one is a colloquialism, so manages to escape the usual scrutiny, but still makes a great, recognizable example.
 
Is this common phrase an example of tautology? “Fresh produce” … I suppose it could be wilted, but …  

They sneak into your writing when you least expect it, and often remain undetected as you publish. Even if not “true” forms of tautology, perhaps a more effective rewrite is still in order. At least now, you know what it is when someone calls you on it!  

Word Challenge: TAUTOLOGY. Be creative, but conscientious, as you fit tautology into your week of fresh writings.

Learning knows no prejudices or boundaries, and it isn’t fattening! Expanding your mind is a no-cost, simple joy. Do you feel that way too? What’s your inspiration? Share your creative genius and Wordplay Wednesday comments below.

Write first for yourself … only then can you write for others. (L.Rochelle) 


[LinDee Rochelle is a writer and editor by trade, and an author by way of Rock & Roll. She has published two books in her Blast from Your Past series (of three) about pioneering R&R Radio DJs. True behind-the-mic tales make GREAT Holiday and anytime Gifts available on Amazon (eBook and print): Book 1Rock & Roll Radio DJs: The First Five Years 1954-1959; and Book 2Rock & Roll Radio DJs: The Swinging Sixties. Coming soon … The Psychedelic Seventies!]

*Note: 1) Dictionary definitions are quoted from Webster’s New World College Dictionary. Yes, we sometimes present them out of “official” context—but that’s half the fun! Think of it as “creative context.” 2) Neither I (LinDee Rochelle) nor Penchant for Penning are responsible for how you use information found here, that may result in legal action.
Endnote: FYI – All links in the PFP site are personally visited, verified, and vetted. Most are linked to commonly accessed sites of reputable note. However, as with everything cyber-security, use at your own discretion.

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Sunday, March 22, 2015

Fox News dumb and dumber



Fox News doesn’t give authorship credit to this article – I can see why.

The first sentence, when applied to the second – Candice Bergen’s quote – proves our world of literacy is under attack.


“Candice Bergen is svelte and she’s happy with it.

‘Let me just come right out and say it: I am fat,’ the ‘Murphy Brown’ star announces in her new memoir, ‘A Fine Romance,’ reports Rob Shuter of naughtygossip.” [*Sic. And there’s more …] (Fox News, March 22, 2015.)

If the preeminent news sources don’t know that “svelte” is not a synonym of “fat” – literacy is doomed.

While Ms. Bergen was for many years svelte – meaning slender, slim, graceful, lithe – and she is still an elegant lady, in her own words, she is the opposite of svelte. C’mon Fox, you’re setting a bad example.

Side note: Ms. Bergen is right about the issues of women’s weight and beauty attitudes as we age. After
forty-plus years of maintaining (or vainly attempting) a standard that is inherently irrational, many are simply opting to live the rest of their lives actually enjoying it. Consider the profound “end of life” question: quality or quantity? Depends on the quality of the chocolate!

*Back to Fox’s literary ineptitude … let’s take a look at their treatment of titles. Although a minor grievance compared to definition idiocy, the last I checked The Chicago Manual (which BTW, was yesterday) – the venerable bible of writing – still states that television show titles and book titles should be italicized, not enclosed in quotation marks.

Mistakes happen. Editors cringe when errors and typos escape their scrutiny and land indelicately in print. But opening line mistakes and breaking rules learned in elementary school – is simply lazy writing and editing.

Today's apathetic attitude toward our English language is a disappointing example of our dumb and dumber attitude, which is mangling guidelines and principles throughout society. Remember the fall of the Roman Empire?

Writing right … righting write.




Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Wordy Wednesday: afflatus - gesundheit!



Welcome to Wordy Wednesday March 18, 2015!

As a wordsmith, words fascinate me and while I certainly won’t memorize the dictionary (not at my age … a word I learn today is gone tomorrow!), I do like to have fun with words.

Wordy Wednesday is my way of taking a break, learning something new, and passing it on to you. Enjoy the weird, wacky, wonderful, world of words!

This week’s featured word – afflatus: Gesundheit! Kidding. It’s really … n. an inspiration or powerful impulse, as of an artist or poet.


'Til next time ... have a "wordful" week!